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<channel><title><![CDATA[Interracial Erotica - Comments for blog: Looking For Your Feedback]]></title><link>https://interracialerotica.net/erotica</link><description /><language>en-us</language><copyright><![CDATA[https://interracialerotica.net/erotica]]></copyright><generator>N/A</generator><webMaster>blueartllc@gmail.com</webMaster><lastBuildDate>Fri, 04 Jun 2010 00:54:05 CDT</lastBuildDate><ttl>20</ttl><item><title><![CDATA[Comment #1]]></title><link>https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4167</link><description><![CDATA[First of all, I like alpha male character, but I like strong women who are alphas too.  To me, in the cookie-cut storylines most authors engage in, they have the men just roll around in bed like Bond with an egg-shell colored waif.  Then, the women wake up all golden.  I like depth and strength.  Pull me into the story by creating story for real women and men, espescially what real women go through and what real black women struggle with everyday.<br/><br/>
(Comment posted by Ebony at 3:04 pm, Sat 29th May 2010)]]></description><author>no@spam.com (Ebony)</author><pubDate><![CDATA[Sat, 29 May 2010 15:04:31 CDT]]></pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4167</guid></item><item><title><![CDATA[Comment #2]]></title><link>https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4168</link><description><![CDATA[I do tend to like male charcters on the alpha side especially in the bedroom but can let go of some of that control out side of it.    I like stong confident females charcters who kwow  how to put an alpha male in his place.  I can't stand a book with wishy washy females who can't make up their mind about guy from one chapter to the next.  It's like make up you mind already do you want to be with this man or not!  I like books  where the author takes the time to flush out the characters and give them some depth along with a compelling story.   So that as a reader i'm so interested in them and their story.   I can't  help want  to continue investing the time and energy into finishing the story.   My friend and I are big books reader who like interacial stoires.  The one thing we both said we like to see are more of interacial stoires with black women  featuring  latin  or middle eastren males.   The are  supprisingly  very very few books out their with those combinations.   It would be different and intesting  to read about it.<br/><br/>
(Comment posted by Crystal at 5:18 pm, Sat 29th May 2010)]]></description><author>no@spam.com (Crystal)</author><pubDate><![CDATA[Sat, 29 May 2010 17:18:28 CDT]]></pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4168</guid></item><item><title><![CDATA[Comment #3]]></title><link>https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4169</link><description><![CDATA[I like that both men and women are alpha as well. I don't have to have the poor girl from the wrong side of town always have to fall in love with the billionaire. Everyday men and women, chance meetings are wonderful. I love when kids are added to the mix. I am not a big fan of menage. I do not mind if the man or woman is an ass, because I love to see how people change and grow or mature. 
Fantasy is wonderful, but I do like the real life being added in as much as possible. I have read where a  lot of readers have said they read these types of books because it let's them live out their fantasies and helps them escape from the everday issues that we have.  They basically want the HEA right off from the beginning, but even in a fantasy we have to get past the bad before we can have the HEA. At least  in these stories we get the HEA almost all of the times, unlike life.<br/><br/>
(Comment posted by Wanda at 5:29 pm, Sat 29th May 2010)]]></description><author>no@spam.com (Wanda)</author><pubDate><![CDATA[Sat, 29 May 2010 17:29:37 CDT]]></pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4169</guid></item><item><title><![CDATA[Comment #4 (Reply to Comment #3)]]></title><link>https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4178</link><description><![CDATA[Wanda, I am so touched that you have hung with me on my menage monstrosity, thanks!<br/><br/>
(Comment posted by Olga at 9:06 pm, Sun 30th May 2010)]]></description><author>no@spam.com (Olga)</author><pubDate><![CDATA[Sun, 30 May 2010 21:06:45 CDT]]></pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4178</guid></item><item><title><![CDATA[Comment #5]]></title><link>https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4172</link><description><![CDATA[Thanks Ladies. I couldn't sit through the entire panel. The panelists were so disconnected. I finally spoke up but I don't think they listened. Basically, I pointed out the exact areas you all mentioned.

Look, I know what it's like to hunt for "you" in a story and face disappointment. Writers have a duty: create a picture that speaks to the readers. But how can you create proper picture when you're out of touch with your readers?

Tomorrow is day two of the lit panel. I'll be sure to include points from your feedback. Thanks!<br/><br/>
(Comment posted by Tracy Ames at 1:37 am, Sun 30th May 2010)]]></description><author>no@spam.com (Tracy Ames)</author><pubDate><![CDATA[Sun, 30 May 2010 01:37:19 CDT]]></pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4172</guid></item><item><title><![CDATA[Comment #6]]></title><link>https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4177</link><description><![CDATA[I know I am late on this, but I like a story that takes off from the very beginning.  Please don't sit there explaining stuff to me for the first few chapters.  "Show Me!" Drop background hints as the story goes along-that will always keep me reading.<br/><br/>
(Comment posted by Olga at 9:03 pm, Sun 30th May 2010)]]></description><author>no@spam.com (Olga)</author><pubDate><![CDATA[Sun, 30 May 2010 21:03:28 CDT]]></pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4177</guid></item><item><title><![CDATA[Comment #7 (Reply to Comment #6)]]></title><link>https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4180</link><description><![CDATA[You know, Olga, you nailed it. I brought the "Show Me Slowly" point in a conversation with some gal pals/fellow writers and one of them brought up the reason why some writers go down the "Telling" route.

It's because some are pressed for time/word limit. Some editors are pushing writers to get everything said at once or lose the readers attention. As if the readers want to know everything (background, physical descr., plot) from the first paragraph.

I, like you, enjoy the hints when reading full novels. In short stories this may not always be possible...then again, this is why we have novellas. Fun how that happens!

Keep on writing, Lady....<br/><br/>
(Comment posted by Tracy Ames at 10:05 pm, Sun 30th May 2010)]]></description><author>no@spam.com (Tracy Ames)</author><pubDate><![CDATA[Sun, 30 May 2010 22:05:23 CDT]]></pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4180</guid></item><item><title><![CDATA[Comment #8]]></title><link>https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4217</link><description><![CDATA[Sorry, I'm late to the party.  However, I was having this conversation with my best girlfriend and I agree with Wanda, Olga, Crystal and Ebony I like reading about alpha males.  The female doesn't have to be "out-right" alpha, just as long as she is not wishy-washy.  And the poor girl, rich guy senario is so old to me.  I'm happy with regular characters, just as long as the story is good. Some reality is great, believable dialogue awesome.  And a well written love/sex scene.  Myself, I'd like to see IR with bw, asian male.  Also, bw who do not look like beyonce or tyra, etc.  How about more of us darker skinned women!  We are just as beautiful.<br/><br/>
(Comment posted by Sonya at 9:08 am, Wed 2nd Jun 2010)]]></description><author>no@spam.com (Sonya)</author><pubDate><![CDATA[Wed, 02 Jun 2010 09:08:12 CDT]]></pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4217</guid></item><item><title><![CDATA[Comment #9]]></title><link>https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4218</link><description><![CDATA[Ohh, and a bit of kink.  Something that is not so vanilla.  Oh, and I'm all over a good menage story. Olga, I'll seek out your story. :0)<br/><br/>
(Comment posted by Sonya at 9:12 am, Wed 2nd Jun 2010)]]></description><author>no@spam.com (Sonya)</author><pubDate><![CDATA[Wed, 02 Jun 2010 09:12:18 CDT]]></pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">https://interracialerotica.net/erotica/blogs/474/Looking-For-Your-Feedback.html#Comment4218</guid></item></channel></rss>